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The story to this was nice and was pretty well paced. The art style and animations could use some improvements as well as looking back over some little inconsistencies. (An example being when the hunter was chasing the monster through the woods and the guns stock would swap between being in front of the hunters arm and behind it.) These little things will improve in the future with time and practice.
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Very good animation. Had good backgrounds, decent characters and a nice story. I feel it could have been improved slightly from a bit better pacing as it seems to ramp up in intensity pretty quickly after the first 2 mins being simple backgrounds with very little going on. Maybe extending the little bit of action at the end or more of a slow burn into murder attempt. All that being said, I also realize that this may have all been to meet a deadline for a class project so you still did very well. Good job with this animation.

Gst95 responds:

Yep, I agree that the pacing takes a rather jarring turn towards the end. I forget to mention, but the assignment required that I keep the short about 3 minutes aprox (not counting credits), so at times it was a bit awkward to keep everything within a certain runtime. That aside, thanks for the kind words!

I really enjoyed the sections where the animations swapped out to the paper puppets or the hell section. Added a nice bit of stylization to the whole of it although I found myself enjoy those parts more then the rest. Maybe a slight improvement on the main sections style could even this out although that could come with time. Still, a rather fun pilot. Good job.

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Fun little game. It's interesting to collect the power-ups and fun to solve the puzzles. None to the point of pulling your hair out but still tricky enough to make you think. Only criticism I have to give is for the music. It's loop is strange and the transition between the key holding song and the no key song could be a bit smoother. All and all, good job

adriendittrick responds:

Thanks for the thoughtful review :)
I agree that transitions could have been worked on, yes!

You seem to have the games aesthetic down and it works very well together. Fun mechanics in concept and the timer keeps you on your toes but I kept finding the character would get stuck in the walls. On top of this, I'd find occasional times when the shotgun wouldn't create a large enough hole to go through or the controls would be somewhat unresponsive. All in all though, a good concept for a game just could use a little refinement.

The concept for this seems fun but I found it's too dependent on RNG. I found multiple times I was being left with no way to go across and get enough apples within the time as ladders just wouldn't appear. It ultimately boiled down to me waiting for a run where the RNG gave me a good enough means to get the amount of apples needed. I also found it strange that it doesn't reset after dying, the ladders just keep going by. Sure there is no penalty to death so I never felt robbed but I just found that the waiting on RNG wasn't fun.

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