EldritchPunk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[White Feet]

The story to this was nice and was pretty well paced. The art style and animations could use some improvements as well as looking back over some little inconsistencies. (An example being when the hunter was chasing the monster through the woods and the guns stock would swap between being in front of the hunters arm and behind it.) These little things will improve in the future with time and practice.
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[Roadman]

Very good animation. Had good backgrounds, decent characters and a nice story. I feel it could have been improved slightly from a bit better pacing as it seems to ramp up in intensity pretty quickly after the first 2 mins being simple backgrounds with very little going on. Maybe extending the little bit of action at the end or more of a slow burn into murder attempt. All that being said, I also realize that this may have all been to meet a deadline for a class project so you still did very well. Good job with this animation.

Gst95 responds:

Yep, I agree that the pacing takes a rather jarring turn towards the end. I forget to mention, but the assignment required that I keep the short about 3 minutes aprox (not counting credits), so at times it was a bit awkward to keep everything within a certain runtime. That aside, thanks for the kind words!

[Kevil the Japanese Devil - The Pilot]

I really enjoyed the sections where the animations swapped out to the paper puppets or the hell section. Added a nice bit of stylization to the whole of it although I found myself enjoy those parts more then the rest. Maybe a slight improvement on the main sections style could even this out although that could come with time. Still, a rather fun pilot. Good job.

[Rubber Hose Feud (toon history drama)]

Good job with this. I found it all really informative and managed to hold my attention the whole way through. I was aware of some of the stuff that came up but it covered a good bit of additional stuff I was unaware of or had forgotten.