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    Very good animation. Had good backgrounds, decent characters and a nice story. I feel it could have been improved slightly from a bit better pacing as it seems to ramp up in intensity pretty quickly after the first 2 mins being simple backgrounds with very little going on. Maybe extending the little bit of action at the end or more of a slow burn into murder attempt. All that being said, I also realize that this may have all been to meet a deadline for a class project so you still did very well. Good job with this animation.

    Gst95 responds:

    Yep, I agree that the pacing takes a rather jarring turn towards the end. I forget to mention, but the assignment required that I keep the short about 3 minutes aprox (not counting credits), so at times it was a bit awkward to keep everything within a certain runtime. That aside, thanks for the kind words!

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